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A small piece of encouragement from Patty B.

" The Old Rusty Bucket "

There is an old water bucket,

Lying out beside the fence,

why anyone would keep it,

to me just made no sense.

The bottom is so rusty,

no water will it hold,

the handle is all twisted,

the bucket is so old.

for many years I kept it,

for the good that it had been,

It used to serve a purpose,

but that was way back then.

Now it's just an eyesore,

a useless piece of rusty tin,

I thought that I would trash it,

with other junk and then...

I heard the sound of thunder

in the distant sky,

and then a softer, sweeter sound,

And this one was near by.

It was the sound of summer raindrops

beating a rhythm like a drum,

I listened in amazement and

then began to hum.

I noticed a sparrow taking refuge

underneath a big green tree

and he began to sing along..

with the raindrops and with me.

I saw the leaves were dancing

and flowers swayed, beautiful and bold

as raindrops on an old rusty bucket

made music to cheer the soul.

I lifted my eyes toward Heaven

and thanked My father there

For teaching me this lesson

and now with you I share.

I was feeling just as useless

as that bucket seemed to be

Just going through a season

of thinking no one needed me.

But then I was reminded that to

give an encouraging word or a smile

Could mean the world to others

and that makes my life worthwhile.

all things serve a purpose,

so look around and consider again..

the things you thought were useless

like the rusty bucket made of tin.

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  • 10 months later...

Hi everyone, I too am enjoying the poetry. Although some of it is depressing, I

think creative expression is a great therapuetic tool for some of us. I know

that all of us, at some point or other, have experienced severe depression and

questioned " why me " . In my opinion, it is far healthier for us to express

ourselves than to let these feelings fester inside.

On a positive note, I am almost in complete remission...I stopped working 55

hours a week, and am down to 25 hours...having the 2 extra days a week to rest

has made all the difference in the world, with no medication beyond Bextra and

some non prescription supplements. I realize everyone is different, and I am

lucky to have great disability insurance, but I encourage everyone...don't

underestimate the power of rest!

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In a message dated 11/26/03 1:40:15 PM Eastern Standard Time,

rachelviognier@... writes:

<< and I am lucky to have great disability insurance, >>

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How long does your long term go for? What will you do after that?

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Hi ...once I get through the short term " elimination " period of 90 days,

my policy lasts 2 years, after which they will re-evaluate. However, the

insurance company is looking to see if you can be " rehabilitated " into another

type of work. My plan is to do what I currently do, just do it as a consultant

at 25 hours a week vs the 55 I was working. Both my rheumy and the disability

counselor at work say that I shouldn't have trouble getting the disability

approved after 2 years because I will be working and as fully rehabilitated as I

will ever get, because the restriction I have is number of hours worked. I went

into remission after 3 weeks of working 25 hours, and I mean a complete

remission with no pain, just stiffness still in one of my fingers. It's

unbelievable. Since the only drug option I have right now is mtx, I'd much

rather work less than start that...this way, I also get myself to the gym and

the pool enough to keep up the exercise, and I really rest two days out of the

week. I know there are a lot of people on the board who don't agree that this

can work, but I really think some of it is having the mental time and space to

do the things we need to do to control this disease.

Anyway, enough about me, how are you doing? Sounds like the Enbrel is working

well for you...maybe in a few years they will have completed the studies on how

it impacts polyautoimmune and my dr will let me give it a try...

Take care of yourself!

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Jan, This poem is beautifull. And it says it all.....Marina

--- In , " Jan =^..^= " <azmomacat2@y...>

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> This poem was written by an acquaintance of mine who has written

many such pieces equally nice. Hope you enjoy!

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> Celestial Wings of Prayer

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> As softly as the dove doth fly

> Across this land so free

> As steadfast as a ship that sails

> Across a tranquil sea.

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> As soothing as a summer rain

> That falls upon the ground

> As wondrous as a drop of dew

> In morning list is found.

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> As tender as a baby's kiss

> Upon a mother's cheek

> As sturdy as a father's hands

> Where strength we often seek.

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> As lovely as a blooming rose

> Upon a climbing vine

> As steady as the heart that beats

> Within this breast of mine.

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> As humble as a beggar's plea

> Upon a listening ear

> As caring as the one who kindly

> Wipes away a tear.

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> As fragile as a new born colt

> Who tries to find his way

> As graceful as a stately swan

> One fine September day.

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> As gentle as the rush of wings

> Of angels bound in flight

> As sacred as the eastern sky

> That shone one holy night.

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> As vital as the Book of life

> You'll find a refuge there

> As precious as the Lamb of God

> The celestial wings of prayer.

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> ~Marilyn Ferguson~

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me smile, the entire evening sky would be in the palm of my hand. "

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Jan, This poem is beautifull. And it says it all.....Marina

> This poem was written by an acquaintance of mine who has written

many such pieces equally nice. Hope you enjoy!

>

> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

>

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>

> Celestial Wings of Prayer

>

> As softly as the dove doth fly

> Across this land so free

> As steadfast as a ship that sails

> Across a tranquil sea.

>

> As soothing as a summer rain

> That falls upon the ground

> As wondrous as a drop of dew

> In morning list is found.

>

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>

> As tender as a baby's kiss

> Upon a mother's cheek

> As sturdy as a father's hands

> Where strength we often seek.

>

> As lovely as a blooming rose

> Upon a climbing vine

> As steady as the heart that beats

> Within this breast of mine.

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> As humble as a beggar's plea

> Upon a listening ear

> As caring as the one who kindly

> Wipes away a tear.

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> As fragile as a new born colt

> Who tries to find his way

> As graceful as a stately swan

> One fine September day.

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> As gentle as the rush of wings

> Of angels bound in flight

> As sacred as the eastern sky

> That shone one holy night.

>

> As vital as the Book of life

> You'll find a refuge there

> As precious as the Lamb of God

> The celestial wings of prayer.

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> ~Marilyn Ferguson~

> Copyright 2002

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me smile, the entire evening sky would be in the palm of my hand. "

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Just beautiful, Jan, Thanks for sharing.

Hugs

June

----- Original Message -----

From: Jan =^..^=

This poem was written by an acquaintance of mine who has written many such

pieces equally nice. Hope you enjoy!

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Celestial Wings of Prayer

As softly as the dove doth fly

Across this land so free

As steadfast as a ship that sails

Across a tranquil sea.

As soothing as a summer rain

That falls upon the ground

As wondrous as a drop of dew

In morning list is found.

As tender as a baby's kiss

Upon a mother's cheek

As sturdy as a father's hands

Where strength we often seek.

As lovely as a blooming rose

Upon a climbing vine

As steady as the heart that beats

Within this breast of mine.

As humble as a beggar's plea

Upon a listening ear

As caring as the one who kindly

Wipes away a tear.

As fragile as a new born colt

Who tries to find his way

As graceful as a stately swan

One fine September day.

As gentle as the rush of wings

Of angels bound in flight

As sacred as the eastern sky

That shone one holy night.

As vital as the Book of life

You'll find a refuge there

As precious as the Lamb of God

The celestial wings of prayer.

~Marilyn Ferguson~

Copyright 2002

~ " If I could reach up and hold a star for every time you've made me smile, the

entire evening sky would be in the palm of my hand. "

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Just beautiful, Jan, Thanks for sharing.

Hugs

June

----- Original Message -----

From: Jan =^..^=

This poem was written by an acquaintance of mine who has written many such

pieces equally nice. Hope you enjoy!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Celestial Wings of Prayer

As softly as the dove doth fly

Across this land so free

As steadfast as a ship that sails

Across a tranquil sea.

As soothing as a summer rain

That falls upon the ground

As wondrous as a drop of dew

In morning list is found.

As tender as a baby's kiss

Upon a mother's cheek

As sturdy as a father's hands

Where strength we often seek.

As lovely as a blooming rose

Upon a climbing vine

As steady as the heart that beats

Within this breast of mine.

As humble as a beggar's plea

Upon a listening ear

As caring as the one who kindly

Wipes away a tear.

As fragile as a new born colt

Who tries to find his way

As graceful as a stately swan

One fine September day.

As gentle as the rush of wings

Of angels bound in flight

As sacred as the eastern sky

That shone one holy night.

As vital as the Book of life

You'll find a refuge there

As precious as the Lamb of God

The celestial wings of prayer.

~Marilyn Ferguson~

Copyright 2002

~ " If I could reach up and hold a star for every time you've made me smile, the

entire evening sky would be in the palm of my hand. "

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Hi Jan,

Do you have any about the Bhudda?

June Dixon <juner24@...> wrote:

Just beautiful, Jan, Thanks for sharing.

Hugs

June

----- Original Message -----

From: Jan =^..^=

This poem was written by an acquaintance of mine who has written many such

pieces equally nice. Hope you enjoy!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Celestial Wings of Prayer

As softly as the dove doth fly

Across this land so free

As steadfast as a ship that sails

Across a tranquil sea.

As soothing as a summer rain

That falls upon the ground

As wondrous as a drop of dew

In morning list is found.

As tender as a baby's kiss

Upon a mother's cheek

As sturdy as a father's hands

Where strength we often seek.

As lovely as a blooming rose

Upon a climbing vine

As steady as the heart that beats

Within this breast of mine.

As humble as a beggar's plea

Upon a listening ear

As caring as the one who kindly

Wipes away a tear.

As fragile as a new born colt

Who tries to find his way

As graceful as a stately swan

One fine September day.

As gentle as the rush of wings

Of angels bound in flight

As sacred as the eastern sky

That shone one holy night.

As vital as the Book of life

You'll find a refuge there

As precious as the Lamb of God

The celestial wings of prayer.

~Marilyn Ferguson~

Copyright 2002

~ " If I could reach up and hold a star for every time you've made me smile, the

entire evening sky would be in the palm of my hand. "

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Hi Jan,

Do you have any about the Bhudda?

June Dixon <juner24@...> wrote:

Just beautiful, Jan, Thanks for sharing.

Hugs

June

----- Original Message -----

From: Jan =^..^=

This poem was written by an acquaintance of mine who has written many such

pieces equally nice. Hope you enjoy!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Celestial Wings of Prayer

As softly as the dove doth fly

Across this land so free

As steadfast as a ship that sails

Across a tranquil sea.

As soothing as a summer rain

That falls upon the ground

As wondrous as a drop of dew

In morning list is found.

As tender as a baby's kiss

Upon a mother's cheek

As sturdy as a father's hands

Where strength we often seek.

As lovely as a blooming rose

Upon a climbing vine

As steady as the heart that beats

Within this breast of mine.

As humble as a beggar's plea

Upon a listening ear

As caring as the one who kindly

Wipes away a tear.

As fragile as a new born colt

Who tries to find his way

As graceful as a stately swan

One fine September day.

As gentle as the rush of wings

Of angels bound in flight

As sacred as the eastern sky

That shone one holy night.

As vital as the Book of life

You'll find a refuge there

As precious as the Lamb of God

The celestial wings of prayer.

~Marilyn Ferguson~

Copyright 2002

~ " If I could reach up and hold a star for every time you've made me smile, the

entire evening sky would be in the palm of my hand. "

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Perhaps bluemeany has some she/he would like to share, I would also welcome

them.

Hugs

June

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> Hi Jan,

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> Do you have any about the Bhudda?

I, too, would enjoy Buddhist or other Eastern thoughts.

S.

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Perhaps bluemeany has some she/he would like to share, I would also welcome

them.

Hugs

June

[ ] Re: Poetry

> Hi Jan,

>

> Do you have any about the Bhudda?

I, too, would enjoy Buddhist or other Eastern thoughts.

S.

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  • 4 months later...

Donna my work is your work as always.. I just write because sometimes

thinking gets to hard.. writing lets it all out and I can continue living a semi

normal life without all those thoughts crowding my head.

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Thanks , that was a fistful of wisdom, so beautifully put to rhyme.

xoxox

Lottie

" The greatest obstacle in our journey is closing the window to light and

detachment to the rest of the world. " (by Me)

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