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Thanks for sharing your beautiful words Randy!

They touched my heart!

Sheila

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> Taking The Time

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> I take this time; which is no time.

> An eternal moment. A momentary eternity-

> This precious numbing existance,

> brought to me by you.

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> In life's confusions and turmoils,

> the wind whispered your name

> and the sun had shown me your face,

> and with this,I found myself also.

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> Amazing... to try to describe

> you and I / one light from two candles,

> each complimenting the other.

> Each sentence spoken

> and each thought

> syncronized into one.

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> My breath has been taken over by yours.

> My lungs rise and fall.

> Each a reminder,a gratitude

> to you and whatever let this become.

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> I feel your heart inside me.

> Perhaps it is my blood which sustains it,

> but the heart itself is totally you.

> Precious you.

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> How does one express such things?

> Put the wordless into words?

> To describe that I feel you completely;

> your every thought,

> your joys,

> appreciations for flowers,

> and the auspiciousness of fireflies?

> Proof the impossible is very possible.

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> So,in this Bliss,

> this Heaven,

> this miracle,

> I will sit quietly

> and take the time

> to live. (finially).

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> Compassion To All,

>

Randy

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Randy, thank you so much. Your poem is beautiful and comforting. Thank you, VickiRandy <jqpublic_59@...> wrote: Taking The TimeI take this time; which is no time.An eternal moment. A momentary eternity-This precious numbing existance,brought to me by you.In life's confusions and turmoils,the wind whispered your nameand the sun had shown me your face,and with this,I found myself also.Amazing... to try to describeyou and I / one light from two

candles,each complimenting the other.Each sentence spokenand each thoughtsyncronized into one.My breath has been taken over by yours.My lungs rise and fall.Each a reminder,a gratitudeto you and whatever let this become.I feel your heart inside me.Perhaps it is my blood which sustains it,but the heart itself is totally you.Precious you.How does one express such things?Put the wordless into words?To describe that I feel you completely;your every thought,your joys,appreciations for flowers,and the auspiciousness of fireflies?Proof the impossible is very possible.So,in this Bliss,this Heaven,this miracle,I will sit quietlyand take the timeto live. (finially).Compassion To All,RandyPrayer isn't a time to give orders but to report for duty!

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Absolutely BRILLIANT Randy! I love this poem. Thank you so much for sharing it. I especially love how it first starts out:"I take this time; which is no time.An eternal moment. A momentary eternity-This precious numbing existance,brought to me by you."Completely puts you where you want the reader to be. Many blessings!Stefanie>> > > > > Taking The Time> > > > I take this time; which is no time.> An eternal moment. A momentary eternity-> This precious numbing existance,> brought to me by you.> > In life's confusions and turmoils,> the wind whispered your name> and the sun had shown me your face,> and with this,I found myself also.> > Amazing... to try to describe> you and I / one light from two candles,> each complimenting the other.> Each sentence spoken> and each thought> syncronized into one.> > My breath has been taken over by yours.> My lungs rise and fall.> Each a reminder,a gratitude> to you and whatever let this become.> > I feel your heart inside me.> Perhaps it is my blood which sustains it,> but the heart itself is totally you.> Precious you.> > How does one express such things?> Put the wordless into words?> To describe that I feel you completely;> your every thought,> your joys,> appreciations for flowers,> and the auspiciousness of fireflies?> Proof the impossible is very possible.> > So,in this Bliss,> this Heaven,> this miracle,> I will sit quietly> and take the time> to live. (finially).> > > > Compassion To All,> Randy>

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thankyou for allowing me to share this

beautiful poem

namaste

kate

--- In , " Randy " <jqpublic_59@...>

wrote:

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>

>

>

>

> Taking The Time

>

>

>

> I take this time; which is no time.

> An eternal moment. A momentary eternity-

> This precious numbing existance,

> brought to me by you.

>

> In life's confusions and turmoils,

> the wind whispered your name

> and the sun had shown me your face,

> and with this,I found myself also.

>

> Amazing... to try to describe

> you and I / one light from two candles,

> each complimenting the other.

> Each sentence spoken

> and each thought

> syncronized into one.

>

> My breath has been taken over by yours.

> My lungs rise and fall.

> Each a reminder,a gratitude

> to you and whatever let this become.

>

> I feel your heart inside me.

> Perhaps it is my blood which sustains it,

> but the heart itself is totally you.

> Precious you.

>

> How does one express such things?

> Put the wordless into words?

> To describe that I feel you completely;

> your every thought,

> your joys,

> appreciations for flowers,

> and the auspiciousness of fireflies?

> Proof the impossible is very possible.

>

> So,in this Bliss,

> this Heaven,

> this miracle,

> I will sit quietly

> and take the time

> to live. (finially).

>

>

>

> Compassion To All,

>

Randy

>

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Dear Randy,

Again you have invoked many feelings with your poetry!! You

are very, very gifted and the beauty of your words are magickal!!

Thank you again for sharing yourself and this gift with me/us!! I

loved it, I especially like the part, Precious One...Very sweet and

to the point...Invokes the child within to come out and play! hehe

Thank you again!! Blessings, LUNA

--- In , " Randy " <jqpublic_59@...>

wrote:

>

>

>

>

>

> Taking The Time

>

>

>

> I take this time; which is no time.

> An eternal moment. A momentary eternity-

> This precious numbing existance,

> brought to me by you.

>

> In life's confusions and turmoils,

> the wind whispered your name

> and the sun had shown me your face,

> and with this,I found myself also.

>

> Amazing... to try to describe

> you and I / one light from two candles,

> each complimenting the other.

> Each sentence spoken

> and each thought

> syncronized into one.

>

> My breath has been taken over by yours.

> My lungs rise and fall.

> Each a reminder,a gratitude

> to you and whatever let this become.

>

> I feel your heart inside me.

> Perhaps it is my blood which sustains it,

> but the heart itself is totally you.

> Precious you.

>

> How does one express such things?

> Put the wordless into words?

> To describe that I feel you completely;

> your every thought,

> your joys,

> appreciations for flowers,

> and the auspiciousness of fireflies?

> Proof the impossible is very possible.

>

> So,in this Bliss,

> this Heaven,

> this miracle,

> I will sit quietly

> and take the time

> to live. (finially).

>

>

>

> Compassion To All,

>

Randy

>

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