Re: A retake on an old poem / A Picture of You

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Randy,

What a " divine " poem. I cannot find the words to describe

the many emotions I felt when I read this poem. I felt as if the

poem were directed to me, not in the ego sense, but in pure love, and

I also felt such happiness and tranquility. This is certainly a

beautiful expression of love and how you express yourself, honestly

continues to touch my heart. You are truly a wonderful

writer/artist, Randy! Om Mani Padme Hum, LUNA

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> I wrote a poem long ago which has already been posted here

called " Complete " . Later down the road, I was experimented with a

mixture of styles and I noticed that toward the end, this already

written poem became a piece of an even better one.

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> A Picture of You/ (Complete; version 2)

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>

> ( Somewhere between the earth and skies,

> a little glimpse of Heaven lies.)

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> Contained within and beyond

> the magical

> serene

> boundries of your beauty,

> as you shine to the world

> and reassure others of life.

> Holding the hand

> of those who think that they are already dead-

> Whispering words

> to bring them joy.

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> ( Within my darkness shines the sun,

> which wears your name, O precious one.)

>

> The precious heart

> nestled within your being,

> beating slowly,

> softly,

> allowing each forthcoming breath

> to become the anticipation of others;

> A poem not yet read.

> A sond not yet heard...

> from you,

> only you.

>

> ( I praise whatever brought me you,

> and tender smiles I never knew.)

>

> The power with an unknown name.

> A God.

> Fate perhaps,

> though all that matters

> is I call it a miracle in life-

> or a most sacred dream;

> one from which

> I pray

> that I never wake.

>

> ( I wish on you, my dancing star.

> I hold you close yet see you far.)

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> Far, so infinately far.

> Beyond the sight of my eyes,

> as they shine for you.

> Reflecting.

> Holding softly

> the light and warmth

> which is you,

> and a reminder

> of what you have given me.

> ...Life.

>

> ( You sweet flower, in life i'd meet,

> have made me feel as if complete.)

>

> You complete me.

> You make me what I am.

> What I need to be,

> and what I wish to be.

> From your heart,

> I am given feelings and emotions.

> Your eyes give me vision and light.

> It is your breath

> which makes my chest rise and fall,

> ever so gently,

> and when sleep becomes you-

> it becomes me,

> and I find in my dreams

> all that you are.

> Yes.

> All that you are.

> All that I am.

> All that I need to be.

> All that I wish to be.

> You truely complete me.

>

> ( How can one hear what can't be heard?

> beyond the depth of spoken word.)

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> Randy

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