Looking for feedback on a blog post about ACT

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Hi all,

I've got a new piece on my blog about ACT that I would appreciate feedback on -

you can find it here:

http://storyandantistory.org/2011/07/the-rules-we-follow-for-who-we-are/

Basically I'm looking to refine how I write about ACT, with an eye toward a

wider audience at some point (not yet determined what the format might be, or

when). It's tricky stuff & I'd appreciate any gut reactions you might have, pro

or con. You can comment either on the blog itself (there is a Comments feature)

or here, or else backchannel to me directly.

thanks!

Randy