Guest guest Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 Your poetry is so spot on. (Is that the right use of the term?) Thank you. BillTo: ACT_for_the_Public From: experiential2010@...Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2011 21:49:01 +0000Subject: Going on to Forgiveness I'm still in poetry mode. It is something that moves me even though I am not a poet. I draw too but I am not an artist, and I sing (without a band) and dance without a single lesson...Aptly titled I guess.... GOING ON Where do I go from here? The future seems to disappear. Like an illusion it fades Cleaned by a million maids. Sending messages to the next In a language well vexed, But its outdated and past thought That I noticed, that I caught. Where to go has not been written yet But act not in haste or you may regret. Forward movement is gravities' force, Felt as energy and action without remorse. So, in movement I go on Within a space of both right and wrong, As I move to observe living And the elements of forgiving. Lou (Dec.2011) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 Now I'm blushing Bill... Right now I sit on both sides of that coin with ego on one side and humility on the other. Maybe there is another poem in there, ha, ha, ha...don't worry, I wouldn't post them all. ;-P Cheers mate, Lou To: ACT_for_the_Public <act_for_the_public > Sent: Saturday, 24 December 2011 8:40 AM Subject: RE: Going on to Forgiveness Your poetry is so spot on. (Is that the right use of the term?) Thank you. BillTo: ACT_for_the_Public From: experiential2010@...Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2011 21:49:01 +0000Subject: Going on to Forgiveness I'm still in poetry mode. It is something that moves me even though I am not a poet. I draw too but I am not an artist, and I sing (without a band) and dance without a single lesson...Aptly titled I guess.... GOING ON Where do I go from here? The future seems to disappear. Like an illusion it fades Cleaned by a million maids. Sending messages to the next In a language well vexed, But its outdated and past thought That I noticed, that I caught. Where to go has not been written yet But act not in haste or you may regret. Forward movement is gravities' force, Felt as energy and action without remorse. So, in movement I go on Within a space of both right and wrong, As I move to observe living And the elements of forgiving. Lou (Dec.2011) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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