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Your poetry is so spot on. (Is that the right use of the term?) Thank you. BillTo: ACT_for_the_Public From: experiential2010@...Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2011 21:49:01 +0000Subject: Going on to Forgiveness

I'm still in poetry mode. It is something that moves me even though I am not a poet. I draw too but I am not an artist, and I sing (without a band) and dance without a single lesson...Aptly titled I guess....

GOING ON

Where do I go from here?

The future seems to disappear.

Like an illusion it fades

Cleaned by a million maids.

Sending messages to the next

In a language well vexed,

But its outdated and past thought

That I noticed, that I caught.

Where to go has not been written yet

But act not in haste or you may regret.

Forward movement is gravities' force,

Felt as energy and action without remorse.

So, in movement I go on

Within a space of both right and wrong,

As I move to observe living

And the elements of forgiving.

Lou (Dec.2011)

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Now I'm blushing Bill... Right now I sit on both sides of that coin with ego on one side and humility on the other. Maybe there is another poem in there, ha, ha, ha...don't worry, I wouldn't post them all. ;-P Cheers mate, Lou To: ACT_for_the_Public <act_for_the_public > Sent: Saturday, 24 December 2011 8:40 AM Subject: RE: Going on to Forgiveness

Your poetry is so spot on. (Is that the right use of the term?) Thank you. BillTo: ACT_for_the_Public From: experiential2010@...Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2011 21:49:01 +0000Subject: Going on to Forgiveness

I'm still in poetry mode. It is something that moves me even though I am not a poet. I draw too but I am not an artist, and I sing (without a band) and dance without a single lesson...Aptly titled I guess....

GOING ON

Where do I go from here?

The future seems to disappear.

Like an illusion it fades

Cleaned by a million maids.

Sending messages to the next

In a language well vexed,

But its outdated and past thought

That I noticed, that I caught.

Where to go has not been written yet

But act not in haste or you may regret.

Forward movement is gravities' force,

Felt as energy and action without remorse.

So, in movement I go on

Within a space of both right and wrong,

As I move to observe living

And the elements of forgiving.

Lou (Dec.2011)

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