Guest guest Posted December 1, 2007 Report Share Posted December 1, 2007 Brilliant !!! All three poems are absolutely beautiful! While I was reading them my scalp started feeling all tingly (which means a strong move of energy at my crown). Your poetry is very "awakening". Please keep writing, to read your poetry is a moving experience. Much love,Stefanie>> Hi, I posted these under subject Grist for the Mill (a saying from my> beloved, Ram Dass) but perhaps I should explain why i am posting them.> I am very close to opening a poetry web-site and Myspace is giving me> some feedback which is nice. I am wanting to know how a more totally> spiritually and spiritually diverse community such as ours here feels> about the work before the site opens (techie computer stuff being> worked out right now..glad I married one of those type guys..lol) > If you like it great if you really don't or have mixed emotions that> is still good feedback so I know how to approach the work.(sort of> moving towards publishing is the goal)The idea is healing through> putting life experience into lyrical type poetry..plus some occasional> fantasy for fun..most the stuff on my Myspace blogs is more serious to> be honest..all taken from my life.> most of you know me and I would be happy for your comments here or at> Myspace..> www.myspace.com/rosebutterfly1985> Thanks> > > Holy Waters> > Take this cup and drink> for it is bless-ed> the water is Holy> Like the Sea of Galilee> This drink God made Holy for thee> > Enter the bath in holy awe> How lucky we are> to have warm baths everyday> Like the River Ganges this water is Holy> enter slowly> God drew this bath for you> > Watch the steam rise slowly> it's Holy> It cooks your food> Like Christ in the Jordan River> it baptizes your dinners> it's been on earth for eternity> > Walk into the ocean> the rivers and the lakes> They remove your worries, your pains> your pressure and your aches> Give thanks as you wade in> Say prays as it bathes your skin> Bless it from within> For all water is Holy, it's Sacred; God's gift to man.> > > > A Moment To Love> > So long ago> we had so little time> the air so cold the water so warm> a snowflake drifted down> landed on your perfect brow> > You taught me chess> brought me a sandwich;> when there was so little food> a dark soul called me away> your memory's all that's left of you> > > Raven Lady> > the deep twilight dusk> first i smelt the scent of musk> her pulling presence called out, I turned swiftly about> a dark winged raven with an indigo glow> And at that exact moment, time ceased to flow> I knew she had come for me and it was time to go> > Her wings opened up with a learch> As she found a soft place on my shoulder to perch> "I know you", I told her> As she whispered into my ear> a language I knew but knew not from where> And she told me secrets of my soul from long ago> and where we would be going> She brought back memories of lives I'd long for and once did know> > My full length wooden oval mirror is where she flew next> She landed gently on the floor> The raven soon would be no more> as she stepped through the glass> she glowed with hair long past her waist> fiery, the most beautiful face> and her flowing robes> were be-jewled with fire and light and grace> > she reached through the glass out to me with her hand> And I ran to her> like water the glass gave way and let me on the other> side in a world with three planets in orbit> green and indigo and blue> She said, "I have come back for you".> > We spoke with our minds> Shared stories with our hearts> things that before> were so hard to impart> came so easily here> with the raven lady> After awhile we laid down on some rocks> which gave way to become cushions> Tassled and so soft> and she held me in her arms> Union, Bliss, Oneness> And we soared through the heavens> and other planes and dimensions> > The minotaurs walked by and welcomed me home> Shape shifting animals with eyes that glowed> and in swirling colors called out to say "Hello! again"> And as the evening settled in> Three large moons appeared above us> and a sprinkle of light purple crystal rain> lightly coated the planet's surface> > Both below and Above> everything in this place was created and sustained in only love> and the raven spoke to me alone> and told me I would never have to leave home again> and reminded me my name had always been.."Chalice Dove".> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 , your poetry is very moving, I especially enjoyed Raven Lady. While reading that poem I felt a lot of energy moving through me, it was almost as if I could FEEL what was happening in the poems. Being a poet myself I love reading poetry and completely encourage everyone to write. When you are relaxed, calm, and comfortable, just close your eyes for a 1 minute and you'd be suprised what pops into your head lol. I can't wait to see your site. Good luck, and DEFINATELY go for publishing! Poet to Poet ~~ :0~0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 These are wonderful poems. Thank you for sharing them :-) Love and blessings to you! --- In , " soulfire22 " <soulfire22@...> wrote: > > Hi, I posted these under subject Grist for the Mill (a saying from my > beloved, Ram Dass) but perhaps I should explain why i am posting them. > I am very close to opening a poetry web-site and Myspace is giving me > some feedback which is nice. I am wanting to know how a more totally > spiritually and spiritually diverse community such as ours here feels > about the work before the site opens (techie computer stuff being > worked out right now..glad I married one of those type guys..lol) > If you like it great if you really don't or have mixed emotions that > is still good feedback so I know how to approach the work.(sort of > moving towards publishing is the goal)The idea is healing through > putting life experience into lyrical type poetry..plus some occasional > fantasy for fun..most the stuff on my Myspace blogs is more serious to > be honest..all taken from my life. > most of you know me and I would be happy for your comments here or at > Myspace.. > www.myspace.com/rosebutterfly1985 > Thanks > > > Holy Waters > > Take this cup and drink > for it is bless-ed > the water is Holy > Like the Sea of Galilee > This drink God made Holy for thee > > Enter the bath in holy awe > How lucky we are > to have warm baths everyday > Like the River Ganges this water is Holy > enter slowly > God drew this bath for you > > Watch the steam rise slowly > it's Holy > It cooks your food > Like Christ in the Jordan River > it baptizes your dinners > it's been on earth for eternity > > Walk into the ocean > the rivers and the lakes > They remove your worries, your pains > your pressure and your aches > Give thanks as you wade in > Say prays as it bathes your skin > Bless it from within > For all water is Holy, it's Sacred; God's gift to man. > > > > A Moment To Love > > So long ago > we had so little time > the air so cold the water so warm > a snowflake drifted down > landed on your perfect brow > > You taught me chess > brought me a sandwich; > when there was so little food > a dark soul called me away > your memory's all that's left of you > > > Raven Lady > > the deep twilight dusk > first i smelt the scent of musk > her pulling presence called out, I turned swiftly about > a dark winged raven with an indigo glow > And at that exact moment, time ceased to flow > I knew she had come for me and it was time to go > > Her wings opened up with a learch > As she found a soft place on my shoulder to perch > " I know you " , I told her > As she whispered into my ear > a language I knew but knew not from where > And she told me secrets of my soul from long ago > and where we would be going > She brought back memories of lives I'd long for and once did know > > My full length wooden oval mirror is where she flew next > She landed gently on the floor > The raven soon would be no more > as she stepped through the glass > she glowed with hair long past her waist > fiery, the most beautiful face > and her flowing robes > were be-jewled with fire and light and grace > > she reached through the glass out to me with her hand > And I ran to her > like water the glass gave way and let me on the other > side in a world with three planets in orbit > green and indigo and blue > She said, " I have come back for you " . > > We spoke with our minds > Shared stories with our hearts > things that before > were so hard to impart > came so easily here > with the raven lady > After awhile we laid down on some rocks > which gave way to become cushions > Tassled and so soft > and she held me in her arms > Union, Bliss, Oneness > And we soared through the heavens > and other planes and dimensions > > The minotaurs walked by and welcomed me home > Shape shifting animals with eyes that glowed > and in swirling colors called out to say " Hello! again " > And as the evening settled in > Three large moons appeared above us > and a sprinkle of light purple crystal rain > lightly coated the planet's surface > > Both below and Above > everything in this place was created and sustained in only love > and the raven spoke to me alone > and told me I would never have to leave home again > and reminded me my name had always been.. " Chalice Dove " . > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted December 2, 2007 Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 Thank you ..woould love to read some of your writing too! > > , your poetry is very moving, I especially enjoyed Raven Lady. > While reading that poem I felt a lot of energy moving through me, it > was almost as if I could FEEL what was happening in the poems. Being a > poet myself I love reading poetry and completely encourage everyone to > write. When you are relaxed, calm, and comfortable, just close your > eyes for a 1 minute and you'd be suprised what pops into your head lol. > I can't wait to see your site. Good luck, and DEFINATELY go for > publishing! Poet to Poet ~~ :0~0 > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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