Guest guest Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 I feel ya! Nice work! You captured it for sure. It feels good to write about it, put the emotion behind it and set it free, yes? ((((hugs)))) > > A song I wrote somewhere around 1997ish when I was still living at nada's > house. I was like somewhere around 19 or 20ish at the time. I remember > sitting in her living room with my guitar when I wrote it (she obviously > wasn't home). I think it may have been a poem originally but I have no idea > what I might have done with that. > > Nothing spectacular. But it does hint that something is sorely wrong. It's > the only one I remember off the top of my head. > > Mother never mind, > the sound of your child's > aching crying. > Even though she tries, > she never makes you happy. > She's the one who's always down. > > Mother never mind, > the sound of your child's > breaking mind. > Even though she tries, > she never makes you happy. > She's the one who's always down. > > You, you, > think that you are something perfect. > But I think you should > Stand before a mirror, > and take yourself a deeper look. > > Mother never mind, > the sound of your child's > inner dying. > Even though she tried, > She never made you happy. > She's the one who's always down. > > ©Mia > > > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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