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Melvyn,

I like it, maybe I'll have it read at my funeral (many years from now)

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Who likes my poem?Wed, April 16, 08Short but WideMany eyes cry for my destiny Many ears listen to my wordsMany mouths talk to bring me hopesMany hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow

Many dears pray for my lost healthLong time agoI'd been looking for people To cry To listenTo talkTo prayTo do anything for meTo tell me I'm not failed To tell me I won't die

It was my wish to make the BESTsBut now it's just a chance to breathe no matter how.I've forgotten how to smile since thenMaybe it's the answer to a friend asking me to smile.Someday I found there's no more need

To have listening ears To have crying eyesTo have talking mouths But I saw it's just PSC who should listen who should cry and talkAnother wishI don't want anyone understanding I want my PSC to understand my tears

I want my PSC to remember my forsaken loveI want my PSC to go before I doWill someone come tonight from the sky to answer?That Why me?I found a reason to smileThat it's meIt's me who's suffering

Not my dears So I smile to their tears That it's me who's the reason for tears not themAnd I'm happy with their healthNo matter how short my life will beBut it matters that how wide it was

Melvyn20 y/o, psc 2005Tehran, Iran -- Ian Cribb former P.Eng. (resigned in good standing)

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Hi Melvyn,

Thank you for sharing your poem with us. We can all sympathize with your

emotions. Would you feel comfortable giving us permission to include your

poem in one of our next newsletter editions?

Ricky Safer

PSC 2003

Wed, April 16, 08/ Short but Wide/ PSC Poem

Who likes my poem?

Wed, April 16, 08

Short but Wide

Many eyes cry for my destiny

Many ears listen to my words

Many mouths talk to bring me hopes

Many hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow

Many dears pray for my lost health

Long time ago

I'd been looking for people

To cry

To listen

To talk

To pray

To do anything for me

To tell me I'm not failed

To tell me I won't die

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Hi Melvyn,

Thank you for sharing your poem with us. We can all sympathize with your

emotions. Would you feel comfortable giving us permission to include your

poem in one of our next newsletter editions?

Ricky Safer

PSC 2003

Wed, April 16, 08/ Short but Wide/ PSC Poem

Who likes my poem?

Wed, April 16, 08

Short but Wide

Many eyes cry for my destiny

Many ears listen to my words

Many mouths talk to bring me hopes

Many hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow

Many dears pray for my lost health

Long time ago

I'd been looking for people

To cry

To listen

To talk

To pray

To do anything for me

To tell me I'm not failed

To tell me I won't die

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Hi Melvyn,

Thank you for sharing your poem with us. We can all sympathize with your

emotions. Would you feel comfortable giving us permission to include your

poem in one of our next newsletter editions?

Ricky Safer

PSC 2003

Wed, April 16, 08/ Short but Wide/ PSC Poem

Who likes my poem?

Wed, April 16, 08

Short but Wide

Many eyes cry for my destiny

Many ears listen to my words

Many mouths talk to bring me hopes

Many hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow

Many dears pray for my lost health

Long time ago

I'd been looking for people

To cry

To listen

To talk

To pray

To do anything for me

To tell me I'm not failed

To tell me I won't die

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It is awesome i like it alot !!

Wed, April 16, 08/ Short but Wide/ PSC Poem

Who likes my poem?Wed, April 16, 08Short but WideMany eyes cry for my destiny Many ears listen to my wordsMany mouths talk to bring me hopesMany hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow Many dears pray for my lost healthLong time agoI'd been looking for people To cry To listenTo talkTo prayTo do anything for meTo tell me I'm not failed To tell me I won't dieIt was my wish to make the BESTsBut now it's just a chance to breathe no matter how.I've forgotten how to smile since thenMaybe it's the answer to a friend asking me to smile.Someday I found there's no more need To have listening ears To have crying eyesTo have talking mouths But I saw it's just PSC who should listen who should cry and talkAnother wishI don't want anyone understanding I want my PSC to understand my tears I want my PSC to remember my forsaken

loveI want my PSC to go before I doWill someone come tonight from the sky to answer?That Why me?I found a reason to smileThat it's meIt's me who's suffering Not my dears So I smile to their tears That it's me who's the reason for tears not themAnd I'm happy with their healthNo matter how short my life will beBut it matters that how wide it wasMelvyn20 y/o, psc 2005Tehran, Iran

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> Melvyn, These are my favorite lines. (I didn't mean to butcher your poem. I

like the whole poem. These are just the lines that spoke most to me. Thanks for

bearing your heart. Take care, Cheryl in Idaho 49

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> I don't want anyone understanding

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> I want my PSC to remember my forsaken love

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> But it matters that how wide it was

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> Melvyn

> 20 y/o, psc 2005

> Tehran, Iran

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