Guest guest Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Melvyn, I like it, maybe I'll have it read at my funeral (many years from now) Ian (52) PSC 89 Who likes my poem?Wed, April 16, 08Short but WideMany eyes cry for my destiny Many ears listen to my wordsMany mouths talk to bring me hopesMany hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow Many dears pray for my lost healthLong time agoI'd been looking for people To cry To listenTo talkTo prayTo do anything for meTo tell me I'm not failed To tell me I won't die It was my wish to make the BESTsBut now it's just a chance to breathe no matter how.I've forgotten how to smile since thenMaybe it's the answer to a friend asking me to smile.Someday I found there's no more need To have listening ears To have crying eyesTo have talking mouths But I saw it's just PSC who should listen who should cry and talkAnother wishI don't want anyone understanding I want my PSC to understand my tears I want my PSC to remember my forsaken loveI want my PSC to go before I doWill someone come tonight from the sky to answer?That Why me?I found a reason to smileThat it's meIt's me who's suffering Not my dears So I smile to their tears That it's me who's the reason for tears not themAnd I'm happy with their healthNo matter how short my life will beBut it matters that how wide it was Melvyn20 y/o, psc 2005Tehran, Iran -- Ian Cribb former P.Eng. (resigned in good standing) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Like your poem. Made me cry. dee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Hi Melvyn, Thank you for sharing your poem with us. We can all sympathize with your emotions. Would you feel comfortable giving us permission to include your poem in one of our next newsletter editions? Ricky Safer PSC 2003 Wed, April 16, 08/ Short but Wide/ PSC Poem Who likes my poem? Wed, April 16, 08 Short but Wide Many eyes cry for my destiny Many ears listen to my words Many mouths talk to bring me hopes Many hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow Many dears pray for my lost health Long time ago I'd been looking for people To cry To listen To talk To pray To do anything for me To tell me I'm not failed To tell me I won't die Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Hi Melvyn, Thank you for sharing your poem with us. We can all sympathize with your emotions. Would you feel comfortable giving us permission to include your poem in one of our next newsletter editions? Ricky Safer PSC 2003 Wed, April 16, 08/ Short but Wide/ PSC Poem Who likes my poem? Wed, April 16, 08 Short but Wide Many eyes cry for my destiny Many ears listen to my words Many mouths talk to bring me hopes Many hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow Many dears pray for my lost health Long time ago I'd been looking for people To cry To listen To talk To pray To do anything for me To tell me I'm not failed To tell me I won't die Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Hi Melvyn, Thank you for sharing your poem with us. We can all sympathize with your emotions. Would you feel comfortable giving us permission to include your poem in one of our next newsletter editions? Ricky Safer PSC 2003 Wed, April 16, 08/ Short but Wide/ PSC Poem Who likes my poem? Wed, April 16, 08 Short but Wide Many eyes cry for my destiny Many ears listen to my words Many mouths talk to bring me hopes Many hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow Many dears pray for my lost health Long time ago I'd been looking for people To cry To listen To talk To pray To do anything for me To tell me I'm not failed To tell me I won't die Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 It is awesome i like it alot !! Wed, April 16, 08/ Short but Wide/ PSC Poem Who likes my poem?Wed, April 16, 08Short but WideMany eyes cry for my destiny Many ears listen to my wordsMany mouths talk to bring me hopesMany hearts ache for the oceans of my sorrow Many dears pray for my lost healthLong time agoI'd been looking for people To cry To listenTo talkTo prayTo do anything for meTo tell me I'm not failed To tell me I won't dieIt was my wish to make the BESTsBut now it's just a chance to breathe no matter how.I've forgotten how to smile since thenMaybe it's the answer to a friend asking me to smile.Someday I found there's no more need To have listening ears To have crying eyesTo have talking mouths But I saw it's just PSC who should listen who should cry and talkAnother wishI don't want anyone understanding I want my PSC to understand my tears I want my PSC to remember my forsaken loveI want my PSC to go before I doWill someone come tonight from the sky to answer?That Why me?I found a reason to smileThat it's meIt's me who's suffering Not my dears So I smile to their tears That it's me who's the reason for tears not themAnd I'm happy with their healthNo matter how short my life will beBut it matters that how wide it wasMelvyn20 y/o, psc 2005Tehran, Iran Be a better friend, newshound, and know-it-all with Yahoo! Mobile. Try it now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Wed, April 16, 08/ Short but Wide/ PSC Poem > > Who likes my poem? > > > > Wed, April 16, 08 > Short but Wide > Melvyn, These are my favorite lines. (I didn't mean to butcher your poem. I like the whole poem. These are just the lines that spoke most to me. Thanks for bearing your heart. Take care, Cheryl in Idaho 49 > > > > Another wish > I don't want anyone understanding > I want my PSC to understand my tears > I want my PSC to remember my forsaken love > I want my PSC to go before I do > > > > No matter how short my life will be > But it matters that how wide it was > > > > > Melvyn > 20 y/o, psc 2005 > Tehran, Iran > > > > Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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