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Melvyn, New Poem ( Keep Walking Pls)

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I just hope you like my new poem, that's written by my feelings

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Keep walking please

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I want to go somewhere

Where there’s no more pain

where there's no fear

where there's no waiting

My tired legs, please

Keep walking Please

There must be an end in my road

My dears are awaiting me

At home

Where I belong

Keep walking

Please

Whether it's dark or not !?

Whether it's hard…

Keep walking

Please

For my childhood wishes,

For my rolling tears,

For my waiting dears,

Legs, keep walking

I want to see my forsaken love

I want to be a father

I want to hear my kids' voice

I want to be an old man

With stick with glasses

My tired legs,

I'm sorry if I'm like no others

Keep walking

Please

Thanks Mom

Thanks Dad

You taught me walking

If you're not in my road

But I’m sure that your prayers are

Legs, you're my last hope

I want you to take me there

before others do !

Please !

Melvyn Massoumi G.

20 y/o

PSC 2005

(Whipple, Cholecyctectomy)

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Melvyn,

Both your poems are incredibly powerful and bring tears to my eyes. Thank

you for bravely sharing your innermost feelings with all of us, who

understand you perfectly. It's hard to believe that you are able to do this

in a language that is not your native language! Thank you....

Ricky Safer

Melvyn, New Poem ( Keep Walking Pls)

I just hope you like my new poem, that's written by my feelings

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Keep walking please

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