Guest guest Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 I just hope you like my new poem, that's written by my feelings --------------------------------------------------------------- Keep walking please ------------------- I want to go somewhere Where there’s no more pain where there's no fear where there's no waiting My tired legs, please Keep walking Please There must be an end in my road My dears are awaiting me At home Where I belong Keep walking Please Whether it's dark or not !? Whether it's hard… Keep walking Please For my childhood wishes, For my rolling tears, For my waiting dears, Legs, keep walking I want to see my forsaken love I want to be a father I want to hear my kids' voice I want to be an old man With stick with glasses My tired legs, I'm sorry if I'm like no others Keep walking Please Thanks Mom Thanks Dad You taught me walking If you're not in my road But I’m sure that your prayers are Legs, you're my last hope I want you to take me there before others do ! Please ! Melvyn Massoumi G. 20 y/o PSC 2005 (Whipple, Cholecyctectomy) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Melvyn, Both your poems are incredibly powerful and bring tears to my eyes. Thank you for bravely sharing your innermost feelings with all of us, who understand you perfectly. It's hard to believe that you are able to do this in a language that is not your native language! Thank you.... Ricky Safer Melvyn, New Poem ( Keep Walking Pls) I just hope you like my new poem, that's written by my feelings --------------------------------------------------------------- Keep walking please ------------------- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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