Guest guest Posted June 4, 2000 Report Share Posted June 4, 2000 Hi Dr. Rutledge, I have read your report and it sounds good to me. Have you ever heard the saying, " A picture is worth a thousand words " ? Well, I think you should let at least 50% of your patients go with you and just show the results. Of course, I'm only teasing you, but a trip to Tennessee would be nice....... I hope you have a great time and your paper is accepted with standing ovations...... With my love, Pamela Carriker (pianopgc@...) > Hi, > > Ok thanks for all of the criticisms (most were nice :-) > > The next draft is on the web at > > http://clos.net/mgb-paper/MGB-Paper060400.htm > > Again thanks for all the comments. > > It is still in the draft phase so again I am asking for advice and comments. > > RR > > Rutledge, M.D., F.A.C.S. > The Center for Laparoscopic Obesity Surgery > 4301 Ben lin Blvd. > Durham, N.C. 27704 > Telephone #: > Fax #: > Email: DrR@c... > > ************************************************ > Please Visit our Web site: http://clos.net > ************************************************ > > Durham Regional Hospital: > > Also, Please consider joining the > Mini-Gastric Bypass Mailing List > at http://www.onelist.com > > MiniGastricBypass is a general discussion of the Mini-Gastric Bypass > ( http://www.onelist.com/community/MiniGastricBypass ) > > Talk with lots of other Pre and Post Op > patients and friends. > Keep up to date on the latest news about > the Mini-Gastric Bypass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 4, 2000 Report Share Posted June 4, 2000 Dear Dr. R., You present a very informative paper backed up with precise documentation and wonderful graphs. The flow of the charts is great. I did notice, however, that this draft seemed to draw more attention to the mortality statistic than the first draft. I don't know if it is the wording or the paragraph placement. I realize that it is a fact and must be presented. It just seemed to come to the forefront over the postive aspects of the MGB in this draft. . Overall the wording and flow from abstract to conclusions is very well laid out. You go get 'em. You are in our thoughts and prayers. Yours in Christ's Love, Donna B. in Statesville, NC > Hi, > > Ok thanks for all of the criticisms (most were nice :-) > > The next draft is on the web at > > http://clos.net/mgb-paper/MGB-Paper060400.htm > > Again thanks for all the comments. > > It is still in the draft phase so again I am asking for advice and comments. > > RR > > Rutledge, M.D., F.A.C.S. > The Center for Laparoscopic Obesity Surgery > 4301 Ben lin Blvd. > Durham, N.C. 27704 > Telephone #: > Fax #: > Email: DrR@c... > > ************************************************ > Please Visit our Web site: http://clos.net > ************************************************ > > Durham Regional Hospital: > > Also, Please consider joining the > Mini-Gastric Bypass Mailing List > at http://www.onelist.com > > MiniGastricBypass is a general discussion of the Mini-Gastric Bypass > ( http://www.onelist.com/community/MiniGastricBypass ) > > Talk with lots of other Pre and Post Op > patients and friends. > Keep up to date on the latest news about > the Mini-Gastric Bypass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest guest Posted June 4, 2000 Report Share Posted June 4, 2000 Dear Dr. R., You present a very informative paper backed up with precise documentation and wonderful graphs. The flow of the charts is great. I did notice, however, that this draft seemed to draw more attention to the mortality statistic than the first draft. I don't know if it is the wording or the paragraph placement. I realize that it is a fact and must be presented. It just seemed to come to the forefront over the postive aspects of the MGB in this draft. . Overall the wording and flow from abstract to conclusions is very well laid out. You go get 'em. You are in our thoughts and prayers. Yours in Christ's Love, Donna B. in Statesville, NC > Hi, > > Ok thanks for all of the criticisms (most were nice :-) > > The next draft is on the web at > > http://clos.net/mgb-paper/MGB-Paper060400.htm > > Again thanks for all the comments. > > It is still in the draft phase so again I am asking for advice and comments. > > RR > > Rutledge, M.D., F.A.C.S. > The Center for Laparoscopic Obesity Surgery > 4301 Ben lin Blvd. > Durham, N.C. 27704 > Telephone #: > Fax #: > Email: DrR@c... > > ************************************************ > Please Visit our Web site: http://clos.net > ************************************************ > > Durham Regional Hospital: > > Also, Please consider joining the > Mini-Gastric Bypass Mailing List > at http://www.onelist.com > > MiniGastricBypass is a general discussion of the Mini-Gastric Bypass > ( http://www.onelist.com/community/MiniGastricBypass ) > > Talk with lots of other Pre and Post Op > patients and friends. > Keep up to date on the latest news about > the Mini-Gastric Bypass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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