Guest guest Posted September 6, 2005 Report Share Posted September 6, 2005 ee, Your essay is awesome. It captures Dr. Ponseti so well especially the part about him calming the babies and what happens in the cast room. That's exactly what he said to Alaya. I just have a few suggestions if you are ok with constructive critism. Please don't take it personally because I couldn't have done half as good as you did. You paint a wonderful picture and it's great to know the history. That being said here are some minor suggestions. I'm not sure the part about Dr. Brown is good, we don't want to bash all the other doctors just honor Dr. Ponseti. Also I think it's important to say that the method is very easy to learn and only requires a two day training course. In fact Cast techs in Uganda, South Africa and other developing countries also have a 95% success rate simply because they follow the method. It's not complicated. The jigsaw puzzle isn't complicated it's not a 1,000 piece puzzle, only a 26 piece puzzle. It's very simple, but other doctors think they know best. Finally, I'm not sure about the length. It holds my attention because I'm personally involved, but do producers what a short to the point nomination. Anyone have experience in TV? Is this for the Three wishes show or is there another life time aceivement award? Thanks so much for your time and research and your wonderful presentation for the man we all love. Please add our names. Tony and Joanne Fuller, Findlay Ohio, parents to Alaya age 4, born with severe bilateral clubfeet, now with perfect feet. Treated by Dr. Ponseti in Iowa beginning at five days old with four casts. Corrected by 7 weeks of age. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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