Re: Poem by my 12 year old daughter

[Guest guest]

Wow . It¡Çs just amazing. Tell your daughter she has talent at

poetry.

Hard to believe it¡Çs written by a 12 year old.

Debbie with twins

- Jordan (ASD) 2.5yo

- (NT) 2.5yo

Poem by my 12 year old daughter

Folks, I was blown away when I read what my daughter wrote

Untitled by Alyx Loffer

Thunderstorms feel like soft peaceful misery

Pulling itself upon me

As I remember him

Cold air feels like sharp needles

Fighting their way into me

Smell of sweet scented grass

Moist with the morning storm

Sky...Dark, Gloomy, Grey

Much like how I feel

Thunder rolls like hundreds of horses

Galloping in the wind

And my heart, still very sore and broken

Leaves with the storm.

[Guest guest]

Beautiful.

Sissi

> Poem by my 12 year old daughter

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>

> Folks, I was blown away when I read what my daughter wrote

>

> Untitled by Alyx Loffer

>

> Thunderstorms feel like soft peaceful misery

> Pulling itself upon me

> As I remember him

>

> Cold air feels like sharp needles

> Fighting their way into me

> Smell of sweet scented grass

> Moist with the morning storm

>

> Sky...Dark, Gloomy, Grey

> Much like how I feel

>

> Thunder rolls like hundreds of horses

> Galloping in the wind

> And my heart, still very sore and broken

> Leaves with the storm.

>

>

>

>

>

>

>

[Guest guest]

That is STUNNING.

Alyx has such a way with words and a wonderful ability to evoke

emotion...oh, I do hope she keeps writing creatively!!!

Jacquie

[Guest guest]

Remarkable poem. Alyx sounds like she has a gift for words.

[Guest guest]

It's beautiful! She's very talented :-)

Sue

[Guest guest]

Incredible poem, !

My dear sister was named Alix, by the way, and I have always loved the name.

I used to complain to my mother about how I got the boring name. She died

three years ago of ovarian cancer and is sorely missed by us all.

Salli

[Guest guest]

She complains her name sounds like a boy all the time. I think her

name is beautiful but she would prefer I call her Andy. Now how much

of a boy's name is that?

I'm sorry for you, your sister and family...how incredibly painful.

She must have been very young.

> Incredible poem, !

>

> My dear sister was named Alix, by the way, and I have always loved

the name.

> I used to complain to my mother about how I got the boring name.

She died

> three years ago of ovarian cancer and is sorely missed by us all.

>

> Salli

[Guest guest]

I'm sorry about your sister, Salli.

(SAHM in GA)

MSN elizabethloht@...

n 33, mo, no formal dx

Phoebe, 10 wks

Re: Poem by my 12 year old daughter

> Incredible poem, !

>

> My dear sister was named Alix, by the way, and I have always loved the

name.

> I used to complain to my mother about how I got the boring name. She died

> three years ago of ovarian cancer and is sorely missed by us all.

>

> Salli

>

>

>

[Guest guest]

Wow. If she lived here I'd urge her to enter my

library's annual poetry contest.

Tuna

--- shanley_n_teresa

wrote: > Folks, I was blown away when I read what my

daughter

> wrote

>

> Untitled by Alyx Loffer

>

> Thunderstorms feel like soft peaceful misery

> Pulling itself upon me

> As I remember him

>

> Cold air feels like sharp needles

> Fighting their way into me

> Smell of sweet scented grass

> Moist with the morning storm

>

> Sky...Dark, Gloomy, Grey

> Much like how I feel

>

> Thunder rolls like hundreds of horses

> Galloping in the wind

> And my heart, still very sore and broken

> Leaves with the storm.

>

>

>

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mom to:

, 8, ASD

, 4, NT

Normal is just a setting on the washing machine.

- Whoopi Goldberg

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